This treatment includes a class discussion about possible problems they could see as well as things they liked. This was a valuable source of feedback so that we could make relevant changes and therefore making improvements to suit our audience better and avoid potential problems which weren't needed.
The main potential problems I can gather that our peers saw in our film were the use of quite a few different locations and time settings and so we would have to be careful not to make it too confusing for the audience if there was a lot of flitting between these. The other main problem they recognised was how dependent our film was on the weather, and that it had almost become a character of our film. This is because if the weather wasn't right for each scene then the film would not make sense as the mood being put across would be completely irrelevant to the scene.
This is more than just a recording of your reading the treatment. It also includes a class discussion about possible problems, things they liked, etc. It is a valuable source of feedback. Make that clear in your post title!
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